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A LINE IN THE SAND - Al &
Joanna Lacy
The Kane Legacy – Book 1
Multnomah Single Title
ISBN-13: 978-1-59052-924-9
November 2007
Inspirational Fiction
Boston, Massachusetts and Texas Territory – 1834
Abram Kane is a fighter. Working on the docks of the Boston Harbor,
Abram needs all his strength and his wits when it comes to defending
himself and his Christian beliefs. He and his four sons, Alex,
Abel, Adam and Alan, all work for the Dixon Ship Line. Waiting
at home at the end of their day is daughter Angela and Abram's
beloved wife Kitty, who's deathly ill with tuberculosis. When
twenty-year-old son Alan tells Abram he is leaving Boston to move
to the Texas territory, the entire family is shocked speechless.
Alan explains he wants to be a cattle rancher, and he can acquire
640 acres of land just for settling in the colony, where the family
can join him after he earns his fortune. He also asks his elder
brother Adam to be his partner, but unforeseen circumstances prevent
Adam from leaving Boston, and Alan is the first to go West by
himself.
Traveling with his mentor and new boss, wealthy Texas rancher
William Childress, Alan meets the lovely Julia Miller at a stop
in Galveston. Falling instantly in love with her as she befriends
him, Alan leaves Galveston and continues the journey to the Childress
ranch with a heavy heart. He cannot ask Julia to marry him unless
he earns enough money to support her. She is a rich heiress; he
has nothing. Even though right now he's just a hired hand on the
Childress ranch, Alan begins to think of Texas as his true home.
When tensions build between Mexico and the United States, and
there is talk of war, he decides that he must join the fight to
keep what he has built here. This coming battle is destined to
be fought at the Alamo.
A LINE IN THE SAND begins the story of the Kane family as they
leave behind the squalor of the Boston waterfront to build a new
life in the West. This is the first book in The Kane Legacy, and
the story continues in WEB OF DESTINY, to be published soon. Alan
fancies himself in love with the beautiful Julia Miller, but he's
embarrassed by his lack of means. He can't give her the opulent
lifestyle she now takes for granted, so instead of declaring his
feelings, he decides to make his fortune on the Childress ranch
before proposing to her. He dreams day and night of Julia while
he carves his new life in Texas. But trouble comes when his brother
Adam finally leaves Boston to join him. When Adam stops at the
Miller home in Galveston, he also falls in love with the fair
Julia. Thus begins a love triangle that culminates with the battle
at the Alamo. This adds new challenges for the Kane family.
A LINE IN THE SAND is an interesting story; however, for me,
this novel falls short in many ways. What could have been a thrilling
tale of love and honor is led by contrived dialogue with too much
telling and not enough showing. I love historical and inspirational
romance, but these characters lack emotion and are difficult to
identify with. The inspirational element is too preachy as the
narration ignores other religious beliefs over those of the Kanes'.
We are to be reminded that much of the Southeastern United States
was founded by Catholic priests, who were no less Christian than
people of different denominations like the Kane family. Putting
my own personal views aside, I am sure A LINE IN THE SAND will
be a hit with fans of the Lacys' many novels. This is a fine story
for young readers with its fact-filled historical detail.
Diana Risso |
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